Monday, November 16, 2009

What do you think of this poem?

Forget-me-not by Lanette Lusk





We are the bulbs you may plant in spring


We are the sound when you hear the birds sing


We are the ones that could not cry


We are the ones he chose to die





Our tears are the tips of the morning dew


We are the ones that you never knew


We are the rain that's left on the grass


The test for life we did not pass





We are the bees you hear and hum


We had no voice to call you mum


We are the forest that fragrance the wood


To be with you if only we could





We are the sun, the clouds, the moon


We are the blooms that went too soon


We are the stars that shine above


We are the ones you could not love

What do you think of this poem?
t think it is a beautiful poem t have the same poem in a card i bought at rite aid last week
Reply:I love it! It's a great poem. Great Work! I wish I could write that good. Keep up the good work.
Reply:I write poem to here is one.





Dreams





I'm dream in the morning i dream in school i dream everywhere i go love and hope is in my dreams no matter where i go i sing in my dream and i have 99999999 dollars all in my dream when my teacher gets boring i start to fall asleep then i drift into dream land.the end.keep up the good dreaming with poems


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