Are these good lyrics?

i realize i cant put the music for it on here, but i can post the lyrics. just realize, im only 12





Forget me not


Love me lots


We shared the tears





Forget what i said


Where was my head


All those years?





If I could take back what I did


When I was just a stupid kid


I could have said what i want to now





For get me not


Love me lots


Hold my had forever


never leave and never ever


say goodbye


i want you hear with me








and it goes on


wat do u think?


i realize it makes little sense without the music to go with it (i would post it if it was possible) but i just want to no wat u think of the lyrics





oh and btw its about a parent dying and someone regreting not being able to make up with them

Are these good lyrics?
tht is really good like most of the time I thought you were talking about a boyfriend...and at the end....it gets really jumbled...but I really like this and I would like tottally buy a whole cd..if it just had this one song. as long as the music is ok and gos along with it.
Reply:Forget me not


Love me lots





-Sure it rhymes but it just doesn't flow to be sung outloud.





If I could take back what I did


When I was just a stupid kid


I could have said what i want to now





- Sing it ouloud with a slow tempo and it is really good.
Reply:It's actually pretty good. Especially to be only 12.